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Unfinished Bee Pose! by MDetector5 Unfinished Bee Pose! by MDetector5
Here’s a pose involving my character Bee. I did use reference for it as well. I think I have her body type down, but there’s still a few things to work out here and there. Oh, and the hands look the way they do because the ref pic I used didn't show them.

Tell me what you think! I would really love some critique on this.
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Bee is looking really nice here -- great pensive expression. Bee doesn't look serious & thoughtful very often, but it does suit her. She's looking more mature also -- I suppose she IS the oldest of your characters by a few years. A little thick in the middle for the size of her hips perhaps. The line for her butt doesn't quite match her thigh, pulling both out of proportion.
Her face and hair are top-notch. The top third of this picture could stand by itself as one of your best images.
The pose looks good -- no doubt because of the reference picture. Bee's breasts look pretty good too (probably larger than the reference), sloping down pretty realistically, but maybe curving down a little too quickly at the front of her bikini top. The top's back strap joins the cup awkwardly there by her elbow. A little more thoughtful detail there would help the transition between body parts.
The hand is not badly placed, but looks sort of abandoned and is not up to the quality of the rest of the drawing. Not having it in the reference picture is no excuse -- find a hand reference pic and size it in, or get a mirror and look at your own hand. Hands are hard, but spending some time drawing only them will be time well spent. Or give it up and pose your girls with their hands hidden (a serious limitation!).
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Sumac-Dalek Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
That's quite the derriere. Do you think Bee has noticed its proportions?
MDetector5 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sumac-Dalek Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
She'd succeed as a model.
MDetector5 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That could work for her, if teaching at the nearby high school doesn't work out :)
Sumac-Dalek Featured By Owner 6 days ago
When Bee turns her back to write on the board, I suspect the students won't be taking notes -- they'll likely be drawing pictures. ;)
MDetector5 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, pretty much :)
sanakito Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student General Artist
or taking them XD pictures, i mean
Jayspadey Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Saying thighs are to thick is silly. Like Randommode said. There are all types of body types, and I like thick thighs, and big butts :D
This is awesome work.
Make the body types you like, and keep going strong!
I love your raw art :)
KingMonster Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nice. :)
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
She looks really good here. Ummmmm. Like what? :) Well the hand needs work. Everything else is great I thought.
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