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Miss Valerie Valentine! by MDetector5 Miss Valerie Valentine! by MDetector5
Here she is... Miss Valerie Valentine! She spreads love and joy wherever she goes, and she's always cheerful and happy!

Here's a sketch of her head and costume: [link]

Fun fact: Miss Valerie Valentine is the first Magical Girl-type character that isn't based on one of my other characters.
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Ok, here is my honest feed back... I am not really impressed by this. I mean your technique is getting much better and I love the way her body looks and the hair, but as a magical girl this falls really, really flat.

Body wise you still have your usual issue with the arms and such. Other than that your bodies are looking great. What annoys me is you lack of vision and originality with clothing. before you draw her again I want you to go look at all the Precure designs and look at how magical girl outfits look. I think in general your weakest point (besides Arms) is clothing. You need to look into it more and work out outfits that aren't skin tight or pleated skirts.

I do really like that hat though. The hat makes her design cuter. She is like a tomboy magical girl which is very fun but at the same time I am sick of seeing the same dress with the same hearts and the same knee high latex boots.
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zombielily Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Very cute character, hope to see some colour on her sometime soon!
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MDetector5 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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ZeroConfidence Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Very cute work as always, ha ha! =D :thumbsup:
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MDetector5 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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Zumbotron Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Love the outfit

This would be great in colour
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MDetector5 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you
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james-the-c Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Cute outfit! :meow:
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MDetector5 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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